EDIT: After of the awesome =CharmedWings's critique I changed somethings: The Color of the crown, the frills and the red wraps to purple wraps.
I'M SO DAMN PROUD OF IT, YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW, OMG I WANT TO DIE I CAN'T BELIEVE I DID THIS LOL I'M CRAZY YEA XD As you can see I had a mad attack with this, seriously I love It, maybe because of the awesome wings that my friend =CharmedWings did It looks so pretty *0* Also when I saw the Idea of *DiaDomiBee for Mia's Harmonix, I got so inspired and I asked If I could do a Similiar skirt for Susanna, she said yes so here is! Yes the frills are pink that fades on purple, and I actually love It. I'm not satisfied with the tail tough, I know the Harmonix tails usually have 3 layers, but since her skirt is short her tail also need to be short, I love It anyway.
Okay, my first reaction is: wow! I love it so much! I'll write my critique very structured:
Amazing: 1. Her hair, it's girly, but also very Susanna. I know Sus is a little bit tomboyish, but this hairdut is great for her! 2. Her corset, it's so original. The thing around her neck is so original and the stripes and colors on the corso are so original and cool too! 3. The tail, even though it's short, it fits the rest of the outfit so well 4. The frills! It's very original that you made them pink turning into purple
Tips: 1. The change from pink to purple is quite hard on the frills. I think it would have been better if you made the 1st layer pink and the 2nd purple or made the change smoother. 2. The crown would be better with a color that contrasts the hair, because it's almost the same color as the hair now. 3. The bands around her legs are red and orange, and I think it would've been better if the colors would have differed more, but this is original, so it's okay.
Wow! she looks so pretty! I love how you designed it! It doesn't look like other Harmonix's but it looks really awesome and unique. Susanna looks so pretty
Your welcome. oh, and your commission for Susanna's Incendix is almost done. Hopefully I can get the rest done next week, when I have more time to work on it.
Amazing:
1. Her hair, it's girly, but also very Susanna. I know Sus is a little bit tomboyish, but this hairdut is great for her!
2. Her corset, it's so original. The thing around her neck is so original and the stripes and colors on the corso are so original and cool too!
3. The tail, even though it's short, it fits the rest of the outfit so well
4. The frills! It's very original that you made them pink turning into purple
Tips:
1. The change from pink to purple is quite hard on the frills. I think it would have been better if you made the 1st layer pink and the 2nd purple or made the change smoother.
2. The crown would be better with a color that contrasts the hair, because it's almost the same color as the hair now.
3. The bands around her legs are red and orange, and I think it would've been better if the colors would have differed more, but this is original, so it's okay.
But overall: I LOVE IT!
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