Here's my New OC, Susanna; Fairy of the Electric Waves. But you can just call her Sus xD Here's a little story about her;
Her parent lived In a magical planet called Vortis; That was full of vampires; But they were quiet; they are diferent from other bloody vampires In this planet there was no sun, no light because It was on a paralel dimension, and there was no sun on It Her father was Eden, the king of Vortis, and he was very powerful, he had a twin brother, Julian, that was jealous because his father chosed his brother Instead of him.
Eden was traveling on the Earth with his planet when he saw a very beautiful woman; Melinah, He falled on love with her, then he discovered that she was a Fairy, It was bad, because vampires can't marry with fairies, they're on war. But their love just made them Ignore It. Then they Eden and Melinah traveed back to Vortis to start a new life. Eden's Family accepted that happily. Melinah was hidden because It's forbidden a Fairy be on Vortis.
Melinah got pregnant and the family was very happy. But then Julian just reported Eden to the Vortis's Council, that gave Julian, the right to bann all his family. When Susanna born, Julian attacked the royal family and banned them to Obsidian, Fortunately, Melinah and Eden cast a spell that sent Susanna to the Earth and.
A woman called Carmen, adopted Susanna, when she knew that Susanna was a vampire\fairy, she got really scared, but she still loved her.
I think It's a very odd story but I don't really care
Appearance: I like her outfit! It is cute without being overly-detailed. I especially like her shoes.
Personality: We didn't see any of it in this snippet, so there's nothing I can comment on. From her expression, I would guess she's more on the serious side?
History: This is where I have a few suggestions. Firstly, I'd like to know why the fairies and vampires are at war. What caused it? How long has it been going on? As a ruling family, if Eden's parents were so open to his marriage to Melinah, couldn't they start moving to end the war? Finally, why exactly did Susanna need to be sent to Earth? Did the family need to split up for some reason? There doesn't seem to be a reason to separate her from her parents there.
Don't feel like you have to answer me directly, the questions are just to give you a place to start in adding more information to her history. I think Susanna is very cute and what we know of her history is interesting, I'll enjoy seeing where you take her ^^
Wow, she looks great Ich love all your Ocs, but Sus is the best one :dummy; Her story is so intresting I like the way you added vampires. to the winx-world
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